Post by Tiff on Sept 17, 2008 23:14:56 GMT -6
I Surrender
-Tiffany Lee (Me)
Since Bites so desires for someone to post some lyrics to a song I decided I'd write what I've written so far to one of my own songs. If you all didn't know I just made a rock band with a few other coworkers and hopefully we'll get everything straightened out soon and I'll probably be sining this song in front of a lot of people ^_^ When we record it and all I'll tell you =D (One of the members has a recording system on her computer)
So I'd like to let you know that obviously it is not finished, but commentary would be appreciated as well with possible ideas as to how to continue....
I give in, (downward chords) I give up. (up in pitch) I surrender.
Wave that white flag(the a is held out) above my head
Because I know (go with low beats on percussion and bass) that you(o held out) were right (i held out) about this life.
You tried to tell me that the monsters are alive(i is held out)
"They live among us in a masquerade." that's what you told me(held out)
And know I know (with the low beats) that you're not just a raconteur (ur is held out)
I give in, I give up. I surrender.
That white flag's above me head.
You were right. (a beat of space) I was wrong.
No need to prolong, tell(held for a bit) me what you know...(held)
*big entrance*
They live (held) among us, those demons(de held) of hell(e held)
They try(held) to deceive (de held) us, with the stories that they tell.
Life is just, life is true, life is fair, life's worth living.
They tell us, lie after lie.
This is as far as I've gotten. After I get an initial inspiration to a song I get kinda stuck... But basically what is going to happen is I talk about how they trick us and how no matter what you do you can't fight them... or thing to that extent.
Also, there are a bunch of things about the way I sing it I can't exactly explain... like a quick flicker between notes when I'm holding out a vowel and such.
OH and what do you all think of the name...
Betting Bullets
-Tiffany Lee (Me)
Since Bites so desires for someone to post some lyrics to a song I decided I'd write what I've written so far to one of my own songs. If you all didn't know I just made a rock band with a few other coworkers and hopefully we'll get everything straightened out soon and I'll probably be sining this song in front of a lot of people ^_^ When we record it and all I'll tell you =D (One of the members has a recording system on her computer)
So I'd like to let you know that obviously it is not finished, but commentary would be appreciated as well with possible ideas as to how to continue....
I give in, (downward chords) I give up. (up in pitch) I surrender.
Wave that white flag(the a is held out) above my head
Because I know (go with low beats on percussion and bass) that you(o held out) were right (i held out) about this life.
You tried to tell me that the monsters are alive(i is held out)
"They live among us in a masquerade." that's what you told me(held out)
And know I know (with the low beats) that you're not just a raconteur (ur is held out)
I give in, I give up. I surrender.
That white flag's above me head.
You were right. (a beat of space) I was wrong.
No need to prolong, tell(held for a bit) me what you know...(held)
*big entrance*
They live (held) among us, those demons(de held) of hell(e held)
They try(held) to deceive (de held) us, with the stories that they tell.
Life is just, life is true, life is fair, life's worth living.
They tell us, lie after lie.
This is as far as I've gotten. After I get an initial inspiration to a song I get kinda stuck... But basically what is going to happen is I talk about how they trick us and how no matter what you do you can't fight them... or thing to that extent.
Also, there are a bunch of things about the way I sing it I can't exactly explain... like a quick flicker between notes when I'm holding out a vowel and such.
OH and what do you all think of the name...
Betting Bullets